Aaron Vaughn BETA - STILL ON PAPER
http://asvaughn2.iweb.bsu.edu/website/pages/Contact.html
posted by Aaron [+[_]=] @ 2:36 PM
11 comments
TCOM 351 - SP08
Web Site Development
Web Site Development
http://asvaughn2.iweb.bsu.edu/website/pages/Contact.html
posted by Aaron [+[_]=] @ 2:36 PM
11 comments
11 Comments:
Really large pages. Hard to read the buttons on the side. Tweak a little more.
Make the ink darker. It was really hard to read.
looks like a good concept
I like your concept and the fact that it's not all digitally created- just go ahead and fix what you need to and it should look pretty cool.
definitely need more color and rollover images.
the notebook think was definately unique, i think the way u think, however it was a bit difficult to read, good sketches
Dude it would be really sweet if the buttons had rollover images... like the rocket(I think you had a rocket), you could have the normal state be the way you have it and when you roll over swap the image to a rocket in flight with some stenciled in color flames coming out of the back.
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(Sorry for the double post.) I like the unique concept of the notebook idea, but I would love to see some more color. It might be fun to go over some of the drawings in Illustrator (on another layer) in different colors but still on the notebook paper, if that wouldn't ruin the concept that you're going for. Also, I can't remember if you said you were going to keep it as a large image, but you might consider slicing it into chunks to promote faster loading time.
pretty creative, Samurai is pretty random but it all looks cools.
really fun idea
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