Tuesday, April 15, 2008

Brandon Anderson CRITIQUE

11 Comments:

At April 15, 2008 at 2:32 PM, Blogger Zachary Horner said...

Looks good, interesting concept. Video of the shots would be really neat.

 
At April 15, 2008 at 2:32 PM, Blogger Chris Richardson said...

Lots of white space on home page. Sub area page looks nice. Maybe larger font for area buttons.

 
At April 15, 2008 at 2:33 PM, Blogger Corey said...

Not bad, edging into to virtual plagiarism. Laid out very professionally.

 
At April 15, 2008 at 2:33 PM, Blogger Heather Trojack said...

Looks okay, it's pretty simple but serves its purpose. Might want to work on your sub-page and spacing- it's a lot of words jammed into one place.

 
At April 15, 2008 at 2:33 PM, Blogger Scott Loy said...

The links should have a "you are here" indicator.

 
At April 15, 2008 at 2:33 PM, Blogger Wood said...

Nice idea but get rid of the stuff from that other website. Link to it instead, or say that you should o such and such exercise and then link to a website with more info on how to do it.

 
At April 15, 2008 at 2:33 PM, Anonymous Anonymous said...

I like they layout so far. One thing you could do is to get some images from a local golf course and incorporate them into the layout.

 
At April 15, 2008 at 2:34 PM, Blogger James said...

i like your little animations. Simple effective layout.

 
At April 15, 2008 at 2:35 PM, Blogger Kurt Sutton said...

alot of open space on the site, and alot of white. try adding a light bg image.

 
At April 15, 2008 at 2:35 PM, Blogger $eth said...

The header is fun. It is going to have lots of text. You might give it a lighter green color in the background or something.

 
At April 15, 2008 at 2:38 PM, Blogger Maureen said...

The information is nicely organized. You might consider adding some padding around the text on the main page to add some extra space. (You can do that by adding padding to the table cells directly or through CSS--if you need help with this let me know and I'd be happy to help.)

 

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